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I feel like smoke
That vapor inhaled deeply
suspended within love sweetly
held intimate inside, a gas
filling the empty spaces
the miasma that covered
your open wounds
but then you said I choked you
and expelled me in a misty spray
I became ether
a haze, that cloud that surrounds you
the fog that follows until I disappear
inside the pall of  despair


  1. Wow! I absolutely love your use of words here. Here are some: “I became ether, haze…””That vapour inhaled deeply.” Great picture!

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